HelloLilly's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

Buddie request for axman13

this flash is hilarious xD
it's a very original idea.

great job animating the text, great voice acting and awesome misspellings. I believe that axman13 should be had as a co-author.

well for now on I must be careful with my reviews.

thank you for doing this ;)

[Go Screw Yourself!]

I was in this one :D

I really loved your idea. Any new comming up?
I have never thought that it was possible to make such great art with a simple screw. And I never thought that it was so hard to make one. :P

[flinkys 1]

Flinkyyyyys

Lolololol.
Muito bom. :D

diogoshx responds:

obrigado :)

[gangster mind]

mmmmm

É um bocado triste ver que as animações aqui no ng feitas por portugueses são assim... :S

Mas visto que começaste a animar desde julho acho que vais no bom caminho.
Tenta evoluir as tuas habilidades de animação e falar com mais calma para o microfone (LOL) se falas assim no teu dia-a-dia deve ser dificil te entender. :D

Nao foi assim tao hilariante como anunciaste mas achei piada algumas coisas (se nao lesse as legendas em ingles acho que nao ria nada (não precisas ser broeiro a falar para ter piada) ).

Curto ver cenas portuguesas no NG mesmo que sejam parvas!
Gostei! Continua! :)

diogoshx responds:

esta animação por acaso nao ficou assim tao bom, o original era muito lento, por isso aqui pôs rapido mas acho que meti um bocadao a mais...
XD gostei da ajuda lilly.

[Story of Me]

O.o

OMG!!! I love your animation skills!!! I saw all your animations and they are GREAT / AWESOME / AMAZING.

Since you have some trouble with the audio you could add a NG song from the audio portal, you know, just to avoid the silence. And you'll probably win better than the Daily 5th Place :D
Congratulations!!

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THEWESTSIDEKILLER you are the RETARDED here!! you probably never work with flash or even Paint because you don't have nothing in your user page.
You say that creativename56 can't draw but can you make better?
A baboon draws better than you!!
So go suck your level 2 lollipop and learn what real art is.

[The SuperHero Collab]

I'm a little disappointed

I was very excited with this collab and I think that everyone made a great job, but at the end I started to get disappointed with you, Makeshift.

First there was a big list with a lot of people and more than 30 parts and at the end there was only 17 parts (it was not your fault, I know but...).
Second: you showed us some great menus at the forum and then you used this one that isn't that great (besides there's no scene selection).

Finally, you didn't wait for people to accept the Buddies. You should wait at least 24 hours because people have life out side Newgrounds and you can't forget that NG has authors from a lot of countries in the world with different timetables. You could wait at least a day, there was no specific day to submit the movie! For me you were just in a hurry for some reason... (probably vacations)

This probably happen because it was your first collab so you were a little to much excited. I hope you don't commit these mistakes in your next collab
Hope you understand... :)

Makeshift responds:

The next collab will be much better. I was a little rushed. Tomorrow is Canada day...
All my other menus weren't working properly. In the end, i stuck with this thing thinking the menu didn't matter too much.

I worked hard on a scene selection, and then when I tested it for the third time or so, the sound was going all over the place, nothing would fix it.
And my unorganization made this Collab worse than expected.

Also, I was disappointed when like half of the people involved didn't respond, or just left..
Most didn't even tell me they were leaving, or I'd PM them and got no response.

Thanks for giving your honest opinion

sorry about the buddy thing too.

[Flash School Project]

LOL

The first thing that grabb my attention was the fact that my first animation was a school project too.

I thought the cartoon was funny, not the story it self but the way the animals moved.
It's good for yout first animation and now that you know how to animate next step could be add some sounds or music.

[The Roller Coaster]

I give you 3/5 and 10/100

LOL just joking.
Like you said this isn't crap and I think you work a lot making this animation (short but good). I think that if you use another programme instead of flash the animation could be longer and smaller

I give you a 10/10 as an incentive for you to keep making your animations. :)

[Systems Check]

Not bad!! :D

It is really good for your first flash animation but is kind of boring and repetitive.

Keep going I would like to see more

[no tweens]

It's good

For a second flash is really good.
No sound...

I loved the way you made it look like matrix, it was funny actually.
I think this kind of animation is good but next time try to use more elaborated drawings, in other words forget stickman (my teachers get very mad when make one xD)

Karttibone responds:

Yeh, sry for no sound. This animation was really really rushed ( 1/2 hour ). I just had an urge to do this. If i take more time, it will come out better. I will keep your advice in mind. Thank you!